BABY

Hello, here I am, back after a long while out off writing.  This is Baby’s story. Maybe you’ll enjoy it…

« Muuuummy ! Muuuummmy ! » Like a little brown ball Baby rolled down the stairs, his face a mess of tears and snoot. He could hardly breathe from sobbing so heartily, and his big brown eyes were drowning in mixed fluids. He thrusted his rubbery body right into his mother’s legs, bouncing against her, and collapsed at her feet. She did not seem impressed. Calmly, she bent over and asked : « Now, what’s the matter with you Baby ? »

Of course she knew he was not a Baby anymore. He was three already, He should have started school in September, but he was her youngest, and probably last child. She wanted to keep him to herself a while longer. But today was a day off, and all the four kids were at home. The teenaged twins were locked in their bedroom, as usual, and her six years old little girl was supposed to play with Baby upstairs.

She picked him up and wiped his damp curls away from his face. He was in a state, all sweaty and sticky. « What’s wrong Baby ? Tell Mommy. »
« Nana, Nana ! My Nana, I waaannn my Nanaaa ! » Nana the Wubby : it was a wretched fluffy dog, with no tail and only one eye left, but Baby wouldn’t go anywhere without it.
« What about Nana ? Where is it ? Have you lost it ? »
« Janey got Nanaaaaa, he wailed, Janey peed on Nanaaaa !» Baby started to sob again, so hard he could only shake his head in despair.

She headed upstairs, Baby tucked on her hip, and found Janey hiding behind her bed. She put Baby down in order to pull Janey out from her hideaway. She knew the girl was guilty from the terrified look on her face. She frowned down on her, did not say a word : Janey led them to the loo and picked up Nana from deep inside the toilet bowl, dripping with a mixture of urine and water. « Don’t worry my sweet Baby, Nana’s going to go in the washing-machine, and he’ll come out all clean and beautiful ! » said Mummy, and she picked him up again.  Baby watched her with adoration, giving Janey the occasional triumphant glance.

Mummy looked at Janey straight into the eyes : «  Now young girl, I promise you you’ll never want to play such a trick on anybody again. » Her tone was a no-joking one, and Janey cringed. She knew she was going to pay for it. « To begin with, you will pair the socks on the kitchen’s table, said Mum, then you’ll tidy up the shoe shelves in the cubbyhole. » Janey followed her downstairs with tears in her eyes. She resented wasting the first day of her holidays.

Though he did not fully understand what pairing the socks was about, or what was to happen in the cubbyhole, Baby was delighted with Mummy’s decision : it sounded real tough on his sister. So when he reached the floor again (he had to wriggle himself free for that), he happily crawled to his favourite corner in the kitchen, by the big stove. He had a nice colourful mat there, with a big basket full of toys. He silently hummed little songs to himself, while tearing off the arms of an old doll.
Meanwhile, his sister sorted the socks, and his mother peeled vegetables over the sink.

The room was peaceful and silent. The only noise came from Janey’s hamster, nibbling grains in his cage. The tiny thing was Janey’s love. She had called it Binky, and she was fond of cuddling him for hours when she came home from school.

Now Baby was young, for sure, but he was smart. Very much so. And he felt in a disposition of revenge. Therefore he quietly crawled up to the cage, softly lifted the latch, reached for the fragile warm body, and grasping it very firmly indeed, inched forward to the back door. This is where the cat flap was, at the bottom of the door, just at the right level for Baby to discreetly push Binky through. Through to the other side : into the wild, cruel and nasty world of the garden (cruel and nasty for a hamster in any case).

And the day went on, as any day would ; that is, up to a point. As a matter of fact up to a very precise point in time : at twenty past four sharp, right in the middle of this normal afternoon, a terrible scream burst out of Janey’s throat. A scream worthy of the most frightening horror movie. It resounded throughout the house, attracting all the people present (that is : Mummy, Baby on her heels, and the twins. Daddy was off on one of his business trips as usual).

Janey was standing in the middle of the hall, eyes bulging, mouth wide open on her wail. On the entrance map, proud as a peacock, stood Pandora the cat. In its mouth today’s booty, which it had brought back as an offering to the family : Binky. Stiff dead. The cat had rescued the hamster from the wild outside world, and taken it back home to where it belonged. The fact it had died on the way (due to too much playfulness on Pandora’s part, but hell ! Warrior’s pleasure), this fact was minor compared to the joy of returning the runaway to its mistress.

But Pandora felt a wave of panic when the twins tackled it and forced Binky out of her mouth. And why was Mother shouting « bloody cat, bloody cat » ? And Janey, from Pandora’s point of view, was overreacting with this downpour of tears…Better take off like a shot.

As for Baby, he was in a shock of course, but mostly he enjoyed the whole drama. Especially Pandora’s grief. Also he hoped he would have a chance to get closer to the small corpse, for it fascinated him. He wanted to poke and pinch it, see if he could set it in motion : it seemed so still. Unfortunately, Mummy was already bending down, a paper towel in one hand and a stick in the other. She gently pushed the limp body of Binky with the stick, onto the towel. She pinched the corners of the towel between thumb and index and took that shroud outside, holding it strangely far from her body. Janey was still howling, the twins patting her in vain to comfort her. Baby was delighted. This had been a good day in the end.

 

 

 

 

Autumn Has Come

A first attempt at poetry in English… (it is an entry to a challenge)

Autumn Has Come

I sit by the lake
Silent as a stone
And still as a star
The world unaware
Of my presence yet
Is made of noises
Sounds quiet and fragile
Rattles chants and whistles
Of colours soft and hushed
Only broken by the plunge
Of a fish dancing in the air
Silver light and swollen clouds
Wandering on leaves of gold and blood

The postman

(Work done for a new writing course)
‘Yes, coming.’

I ran down the stairs to open the door. I was expecting my Mum to babysit while I went to a major job interview. But here was the postman. Well not exactly ‘the‘ postman, since our usual was on leave. ‘A’ postman would be more accurate. This one was behaving strangely : he was bent in two, arms folded against his chest, and he was moaning. On closer looking, I realized he was bleeding : the doorstep was stained with his blood.

”My god, what happened to you? Come on in, come and sit down.’

I led him inside, had him sit on a chair. I still didn’t know where he was bleeding from, he was all curled up. I hadn’t seen his face yet. He seemed terribly small and thin for a grown man : his uniform was way too large, floating around his body. I noticed this while I tried to unfold him, searching for a wound.

”Where are you hurt? Show me.” He showed me his hand: it was a mess, minced-meat, dripping blood. I grabbed a clean cloth to wrap tight around the wound.

”What happened? How did you do that?”

”The dog next door…” I had to make an effort to hear what he said.

I dialled the emergency number. At the same time I filled a glass with water and offered it to him. The poor man was pale and sweat was forming on his brow.

‘Emergency, I’m with a man bitten by a dog. Nasty injury.’ I went on with the details, and they promised to send help very soon.

The postman was holding his hand in his lap. His head was lolling backwards, the man was fainting.

”Hey!” I said ”Stay with me. Medics will be here soon.”

I grabbed his face and made him watch me: he looked like a child, smooth skin, tiny pinched mouth, big worried eyes.

”Tell me what happened”. I wanted him to stay conscious.

He spoke in a weak hesitating voice:

”I was delivering the mail next door. Thick envelope. Didn’t go through the letter box… Pushed hard. Hand got through with the envelope. Got stuck in the aperture. Rang the doorbell with my other hand. It must have caught the dog’s attention. It went mad at my hand.”

We could hear the sirens of the ambulance. Soon the kitchen was filled with men in white.

My Mum stepped in right in time to tidy up the mess. Baby had not woken up yet. I was in a hurry for my interview. I left before the rest of the company.

I never saw that postman again. But I got the job, if you want to know.

An ordinary school day

Here is an attempt at writing dialogue.

”This morning Marigold gave me a tablet because I had a sore throat,” Luigi told me as we walked down the road to the library.

”Who is Mary-old ?” Ian asked him.

”Not Mary-old, Marigold ! She is my foster mother.” Ian looked puzzled. He remained silent for a few seconds, then :

”What’s a foster mother ?”

Now Luigi was in trouble. I could see his eyes wandering from side to side, his breath was getting hard and loud. I knew he was at a loss for a clear explanation.

”Ian, I said, Luigi lives with a host family : Marigold and Peter. They look after him and another little boy, don’t they Luigi ?”

”Yes, we’ve got Kevin with us now ! He’s three and a half. He is very naughty, but he is not going to stay long : his mum will get out of jail soon. ”

Obviously Ian was still bewildered. ”Why do you live with a host family ?”

”My parents hit me and the social workers sent me into foster care” said Luigi. He spoke in a calm tone, but now it was Ian’s turn to be nervous. He looked at me anxiously.

”My mum hits me sometimes, when I’m nasty… But she hits my sister more often. I don’t want to go into a new family” he said, crying already.

I stopped to wipe his tears, the rest of the class pushing behind.

The day was still young and full of promises.

MRS BRIDGE

My participation in the challenge set on Sian’s blog a while ago…

https://sianlangwriting.wordpress.com/2015/08/31/stranger-danger/                   Strange how it fits Sharon’s piece                                                               https://wordpress.com/read/post/feed/35488870/800280568                                       Genuine coincidence !

A man grabs Laura’s breast and puts it firmly on a cold shelf. Then a piece of machinery is lowered and pressed upon her soft flesh until it is totally flattened. It hurts. Laura lets out a small cry. She keeps her eyes tightly shut. Done.The technician turns the machine sideways and installs her again. ” It’s just about finished Ma’am. Hold your breath ! There…” Clank ! goes the performing device. ”Off you go lady, it’s over ! You can get dressed, then go back to the waiting room, we’ll call you .”

Laura sighs deeply. She hated it. Her first mammo. She looks at her breasts, expecting to see pancakes instead of the usual globes. Now she must wait for the doctor’s approval of her mammary glands before she can go on with her life. She will have to go to this trouble every year now, in order to detect any nasty invading cells before they colonize her body like they did her grand-mother’s, her mother’s, and now her sister’s. The women of her family were born with this curse. Genetics. Great. She’s glad she has sons.

When the doctor walks in, she looks up anxiously.

A bad trip

I wrote this one for a challenge : the story had to “evoke some essence of heat” in less than 600 words. It was fun to write.

Emma swallowed a tablet and pealed off  the post-it note reminding her to take her antimalarial medic from her hand mirror.

She came out of the tent holding the looking glass and her vanity case.The sun had come out and the temperature was getting torrid.

She had gone through her daily hygiene earlier on but she already felt sticky from perspiration. Her hair was still entangled from last night’s restless sleep, and she dreaded the look of her. She carried on with her morning routine, spraying mineral water over her face in an attempt to refresh it. She rubbed in her day cream before applying light make-up on her eyes and a touch of lipstick. A discreet mist of perfume and a thorough hair brushing (no letting herself go, even in the jungle, she was not the type), and she was ready when the Professor appeared through the opening of his tent.

‘Good morning Professor!’ she said cheerfully. ‘Did you sleep well?’

‘Hi Emma. I hardly closed an eye. Bloody heat! I hope we’ll find them soon. Two weeks in the jungle is all I can take.’

‘Oh Professor! I’m sure we’re close, we found so many signs yesterday. I’m sooo excited!’ Her tiny pink tongue licked a few drops of salty sweat on her upper lip. She gave him a passionate look.

The Professor adjusted his glasses, which kept slipping down his nose with perspiration. He glanced at Emma and sighed. He regretted his choice of her as a companion on this study-trip, but few of his students were willing to work for glory only. And she was so enthusiastic… The climate did not seem to affect her, when he was sick from the heat and the humidity of the air.

He had hoped to travel in more civilized conditions. Although he was a well-known anthropologist, he had not been able to raise sufficient funds for this project. Sponsors were getting scarce, and no one seemed to take seriously his assumption of an existing uncontacted tribe deep in the Papua jungle.

‘Here’s your tea Professor’.

‘Thanks.’ She had startled him.

‘Have some biscuits, they’re damp, but it gives them a unique after-taste.’

‘For heaven’s sake, stop being so jolly! I can’t put up with your cheerfulness anymore… Christ! I’d give my life for a thick rare steak!’ He pushed back his glasses in fury.

‘Oh Professor, don’t get pessimistic. I’m sure today’s going to be our day! There is evidence that you were right. I can feel their presence.’ The tiny pink tongue darted again. ‘Maybe they are watching us right now, but dare not approach us! They have never seen civilized hu – ‘

‘Hush Emma! Did you hear?’

‘No. What?’

‘A sort of humming, like a crowd murmuring a – Here, again! Heard it?’ The Professor spied through the dense vegetation in vain.

‘Ouch! What was that?’ Emma put a hand to her neck and watched the blood on her fingers with consternation.

‘Hey!’ The Professor felt a sting in his neck too.

Seconds later, they both went limp, and soon blacked out.

When they came round, they were naked, both of them. Tied up. Emma was sat on the Professor’s lap, as in the most daring of her fantasies. Her head was resting on his shoulder. They were arranged in a huge cauldron, set on a huge fire. The water in the cauldron was already very warm, and the Professor’s face was becoming very red.
Tiny persons wearing loinclothes made of leaves danced and laughed around the fire.

REFUELLING

”You chose fuel for diesel engines.” The monochord voice came from everywhere, reverberating in the empty gas station. I couldn’t help but look around, before I went on with my order.

”Now enter your code” said the voice, polite and firm. The voice of someone determined. I obeyed, I needed to fuel up and go on with my trip.

Silence surrounded me for a while. I tried to see through the night. The gas station had stood like an island of light and life in the middle of nowhere. I had expected a refuge, a nice cup of hot coffee, a chat with the employee. Hell no. This was an autonomous place, ran by automatons, and the neon lights gave it a green supernatural look.

”Take back your credit card before you help yourself in fuel.”

She made me jump, I was lost in my thoughts. ”Why do I think of this automated voice as ‘she’ though ?” I wondered, while putting the card back in my wallet.

”You could say thank you.”
”Oh so sorry, thank…” What ? Did the voice say that ?
”You are not very polite are you ?” said the voice (I started to think of it as The Voice).
”Who’s speaking ?” I felt totally freaked out.
”Who do you think ? I’m The Voice, and I’d like a bit of gratitude. A thank you for example.”
”Well thank you. But won’t you come out ? It’s scary not to see you.”
”How would I come out ? I am The Voice. Now help yourself with fuel, that’s why you’ re here for isn’t it ?”

My hands were shaking so much I could not pick up the pump handle at first, I had to use both hands. Then I remembered I had not removed the fuel cap yet.

”Ha ha”, went The Voice, ” you seem to feel uncomfortable love ! Pull yourself together, we don’t want to spend the night here do we ?” The last words seemed to echoe around for ever : ”do we doo we dooo weee…”

I managed to remove the cap, grabbed the handle, push its nozzle into the petrol tank’s hole, and I summoned all the strength I could to pull on the lever until I heard the fuel begin to flow.
”Well done !” The Voice was not monotonous anymore, or polite. It had become shrill and sarcastic. I trembled in terror.The gazoline vapor surrounded me, I felt dizzy and sick. My eyes searched the darkness but I could see no one. How could it be possible ? There must be somebody, playing a trick on me, surely ?

”Watch out you moron ! The pump’s stopped, your tank’s full.”

I put the handle back as fast as I could and headed for the driver’s side of the car. I was unable to think, only tried to get out of there.

Rescuers reckoned I must have slipped in a puddle of gasoline, bumped my head on the ground and passed out. They found me early the next morning, sat up against my car, blood stained from my head’s wound,freezing cold and looking terrified.
I pretended I didn’t remember anything.

WHERE I MET MY DOUBLE (edited version)

Where I met my double

I read once that we all have six doubles on earth. Chances to meet one seem scarce indeed. I met mine, and it led me into much more trouble than you would imagine.

We were on the motorway, heading for the ocean in scorching heat. Mum was struggling to pass a speeding truck. My sister and I were fighting for space in the back seat, and Harry, Mum’s new boyfriend, slept next to her. The car was packed up to the roof with tents, sleeping bags, surf boards and suitcases, so we hardly had any room for ourselves.

”I give up”, said Mum. ”Let’s stop and have lunch, I’m tired of driving.” And she headed for the service area.

I felt so jammed and scrambled that I burst out of the car before it was fully stopped, sighing with relief, and Sian, my sister, soon followed me. Meanwhile, Mum tried to wake up stupid Harry. I went looking for a public mist spray to cool down when I heard Sian exclaim : ”Watch, Mum, watch, he looks like Tim!” I raised my eyes and I thought I saw myself across the parking lot.
”Incredible! Amazing!”, Mum repeated in awe. The boy was staring straight at me, while his father called to us : ”Brothers! Brothers !”

It was a strange moment : I recognized everything in him, from his thin features to his tall figure, his thick hair and the way his neck stood between his broad shoulders. Mum had already crossed the road to meet them, and Sian and I joined the small group. As I got closer, I could see that the ressemblance was uncanny: we were alike down to the last dimple!
”Hi!” I said, blushing. My head buzzed and my neck tingled with self-consciousness.
”Hello me! I just couldn’t believe my eyes when I saw you. What’s your name?” He seemed slightly older than me, and he was definitely less shy.

”I’m Tim”. I tried to sound jolly, but my voice squeaked. I held out my hand, which he took between both of his, squeezing it while he said :

”Wow, Tim, you make my day, boy! We are sure like two drops of water!I’m Arthur by the way, my friends call me Art.” He let go of my hand and we turned to the others. Mum and his dad were engaged in conversation, and Sian was explaining the situation to Harry, whose mouth stayed open in surprise as he stared from Arthur to me and back again.

”Well”, Arthur’s dad said, ”we must get going, but these boys will sure want to swap addresses.”

”Here”, Sian took out a pen and a notebook from her handbag.